Post by sunsetsites on Apr 22, 2008 22:31:42 GMT -5
I have a story called Dark Desires if you wanna check it out.
darkdesires.co.nr
Excerpts(separated by ~~):
Then, I heard a deep, low, menacing snarl coming from behind the gates of my cousin’s box-shaped backyard. At first, it was faint, but as the seconds ticked by, the growl got louder and louder. My heart thumped and I grasped my chest. Moments later, the growling softened. I quickly let go and sat up.
How silly, I thought. Being afraid of a sound. Ha.
Suddenly, the snarl turned into a titanic, piercing roar.
I thought my eardrums would pop when a massive, auburn figure soared over the pallid fence a few steps in front of me. It leaped on me, pressing my shoulders to the ground. I was breath taken, afraid to even inhale or exhale. My eyes were widened with shock and fear as the furry, piercing black-eyed, animal that was probably about 10 feet tall standing on 2 paws hovered over me, only slightly changing position as it sniffed me.
Abruptly, the creature gazed at me with its chocolate brown eyes with tints of red and gold.
I could have sworn it had black eyes, I thought.
~~
But somewhere deep down, I had a crush on him and I knew that eventually, my innocent crush might turn into love. I could only hope it would be returned.
~~
Whenever I mutated into a werewolf, he would wound me, and he kept a muzzle over my mouth and make me trim my nails anyways so I couldn’t really hurt him.
My life was basically a deep, dark abyss, as was my existence.
darkdesires.co.nr
Excerpts(separated by ~~):
Then, I heard a deep, low, menacing snarl coming from behind the gates of my cousin’s box-shaped backyard. At first, it was faint, but as the seconds ticked by, the growl got louder and louder. My heart thumped and I grasped my chest. Moments later, the growling softened. I quickly let go and sat up.
How silly, I thought. Being afraid of a sound. Ha.
Suddenly, the snarl turned into a titanic, piercing roar.
I thought my eardrums would pop when a massive, auburn figure soared over the pallid fence a few steps in front of me. It leaped on me, pressing my shoulders to the ground. I was breath taken, afraid to even inhale or exhale. My eyes were widened with shock and fear as the furry, piercing black-eyed, animal that was probably about 10 feet tall standing on 2 paws hovered over me, only slightly changing position as it sniffed me.
Abruptly, the creature gazed at me with its chocolate brown eyes with tints of red and gold.
I could have sworn it had black eyes, I thought.
~~
But somewhere deep down, I had a crush on him and I knew that eventually, my innocent crush might turn into love. I could only hope it would be returned.
~~
Whenever I mutated into a werewolf, he would wound me, and he kept a muzzle over my mouth and make me trim my nails anyways so I couldn’t really hurt him.
My life was basically a deep, dark abyss, as was my existence.