Post by punkcakes12 on Apr 24, 2008 18:05:00 GMT -5
Ah, yes I'm writing a story. Surprising no? xD haha well anyways! I should tell you all about it instead of babbling yeah?
I have written a lot of it so far, I'm in need of a proof reader if anyone would like to do that. Please PM me :] If you would like to read where my story is I'll post it up, and or put the link to my site so you all can read there.
Does anyone have comments or anything? Tell me what you think please.
Oh and the title of this story is "Pull the Trigger"
-Leah
Summary
Whats a normal life? Dear Maxie doesn't know. She's growing up in a mafia family. Her father kills people for unexplainable reasons, her mother helps, Max had always stood out of the way, never wanting to be apart of it. Until she turned sixteen. Her father, Bruno Biaggio asked Max to kill her boyfriend Collin Finn. Now of course Max said no. But Bruno hurt her until she agreed. Max was about to kill Collin, she was holding a knife to his neck. Then she just stopped. She dropped it and ran home. She packed up her things, and left Italy. Max ran to New York City to live with her aunt Marie and Uncle Josh. Now, Max didn't know that Marie and Josh were apart of her family's mob. So they told Camilla {max's mother} and Bruno where Max was. They came after her, they kidnapped her and brought her into an alley late at night. Telling her to come home or else they will kill her. Max refused and ran again. She ran to a very small town in Texas. They found her, and she kept running.
Whats a normal life? Dear Maxie doesn't know. She's growing up in a mafia family. Her father kills people for unexplainable reasons, her mother helps, Max had always stood out of the way, never wanting to be apart of it. Until she turned sixteen. Her father, Bruno Biaggio asked Max to kill her boyfriend Collin Finn. Now of course Max said no. But Bruno hurt her until she agreed. Max was about to kill Collin, she was holding a knife to his neck. Then she just stopped. She dropped it and ran home. She packed up her things, and left Italy. Max ran to New York City to live with her aunt Marie and Uncle Josh. Now, Max didn't know that Marie and Josh were apart of her family's mob. So they told Camilla {max's mother} and Bruno where Max was. They came after her, they kidnapped her and brought her into an alley late at night. Telling her to come home or else they will kill her. Max refused and ran again. She ran to a very small town in Texas. They found her, and she kept running.
I have written a lot of it so far, I'm in need of a proof reader if anyone would like to do that. Please PM me :] If you would like to read where my story is I'll post it up, and or put the link to my site so you all can read there.
Does anyone have comments or anything? Tell me what you think please.
Oh and the title of this story is "Pull the Trigger"
-Leah
