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Post by [Rachelle_;;] on Apr 27, 2008 12:55:16 GMT -5
Alright, yeah I feel smart because I have a story...Well some of it
written, but now I have writers block
and need help and comments :]
Inside [1][/b]
My head tucked into my knees and my body curled up into a ball. I lay on the cold, white tiled bathroom floor, a rotten smell lifting from the toilet and seeking into my nose, causing the room to spin more. The music from the downstairs party pounded through my ears and I groaned to myself, curling up tighter. d**n the drinks. d**n whoever brought them. The invitation said ‘no drinks’ but since I put ‘ends whenever you crash’, it seemed like I was saying “Hey let’s all get drunk!” I stayed where I was on the floor, not daring to move and risk falling over again.
The dark brown bathroom door slowly opened and a shadow covered over me. I opened my eyes and looked up, seeing a familiar face but I couldn’t tell who it was. Maybe I saw him while enjoying myself at the party before this? Whatever.
“You OK?” He asked as he slowly neared my body and I just simply nodded. He chuckled, knowing that it was a lie and a smirk spread across his face as he picked me up in his arms and headed out the room. I closed my eyes, opening them again at the feel of my bed under me a sighed in relief. I pulled the covers over my body and looked at the guy as he pulled them out of my hand. “Nu-uh.” He whispered. I furrowed my well done, black eyebrows at him as he smirked and moved onto the bed, crawling over my petite frame.
I wasn’t that drunk to see where he was getting at when he pressed his lips against mine. I moved my head away and he roughly grabbed it in his hands.
“Don’t fight it.” He whispered and kissed me again. I felt my cheeks get red and heat up with anger. I moved my head away again and pushed his chest. That didn’t seem to make anything better and I realized too late. He grabbed both my wrist with one of his hands and pinned them above my head, using his other hand to slip something into my mouth. I blinked a few times, winching at the pain that quickly started to burst into my head at the taste of whatever he gave me. My throat began burning and he once again smirked, letting go of my wrist and sliding his hands up my shirt, peeling it off me and taking his own off too. Pretty soon we weren’t wearing anything and the covers were pulled over us as the night carried on.
I wiped off the sweat that was dripping down my head with the back of my hand and took a deep, painful breathe. Slowly I remembered about the party and sighed.
“d**n it.” I whispered and hit myself in the head. What was I thinking? It was going to be hell trying to clean up the house before my roomie got home. Hopefully he would understand. As I took a deep breathe again and shifted to get myself out of bed I felt an arm clinging to my waist loosely. I turned to see a face and screeched, rolling over and falling off the side of the bed. His body jerked up and a sly grin spread across his face. I didn’t remember that? But…no that’s a lie I did. I remember I didn’t want that…any of that.
“Hey princess.” He said and slowly got up, slipping into a pair of boxers. I shook my head, it pounding from the fall and the hang over and stood up, the covers wrapped tightly around my naked body.
“Don’t call me that.” I snapped and turned toward the bathroom. He reached out, stepping closer and grabbing my arm he turned me to face him. Leaning down he pressed his lips against mine and I slipped my hand between our faces and pushed him away.
“Don’t come near my either.” I hissed and moved my arm of his grasp. I didn’t even know his name or how he got into my party but he didn’t have the right to do what he did to me. No matter what.
“You’re such a sleeper Tony. Just wait until I tell all the guys how you threw yourself at me. Can’t wait to see what Ed’s face will look like.” The smirk once again took over his face and I looked dead straight at him. He went to our school. He knew about Ed and I. But…Nobody knew about Ed and I. Not even Cathie who I tell everything.
“Who are you?” I asked as I narrowed my light blue eyes at him. Slowly he moved closer and wrapped his arms tightly around my waist.
“You have that bad of a hang over that you don’t honestly know? It’s Cameron, Tony.” He said and chuckled as I tried to get away. Cameron. Ew. I actually loved him once. We went out for a year before I found out he was sleeping with another girl in our school and I dumped him. He never figured out why and hated me for it but I mean come on, anyone could figure out why I did that. I wasn’t going to stay in something like that.
Yeah I don't know what else to write now
I got the idea from combining a whole bunch of RP plots together
one night...
Any helpful comments on how to go on please? xD
written, but now I have writers block
and need help and comments :]
Inside [1][/b]
My head tucked into my knees and my body curled up into a ball. I lay on the cold, white tiled bathroom floor, a rotten smell lifting from the toilet and seeking into my nose, causing the room to spin more. The music from the downstairs party pounded through my ears and I groaned to myself, curling up tighter. d**n the drinks. d**n whoever brought them. The invitation said ‘no drinks’ but since I put ‘ends whenever you crash’, it seemed like I was saying “Hey let’s all get drunk!” I stayed where I was on the floor, not daring to move and risk falling over again.
The dark brown bathroom door slowly opened and a shadow covered over me. I opened my eyes and looked up, seeing a familiar face but I couldn’t tell who it was. Maybe I saw him while enjoying myself at the party before this? Whatever.
“You OK?” He asked as he slowly neared my body and I just simply nodded. He chuckled, knowing that it was a lie and a smirk spread across his face as he picked me up in his arms and headed out the room. I closed my eyes, opening them again at the feel of my bed under me a sighed in relief. I pulled the covers over my body and looked at the guy as he pulled them out of my hand. “Nu-uh.” He whispered. I furrowed my well done, black eyebrows at him as he smirked and moved onto the bed, crawling over my petite frame.
I wasn’t that drunk to see where he was getting at when he pressed his lips against mine. I moved my head away and he roughly grabbed it in his hands.
“Don’t fight it.” He whispered and kissed me again. I felt my cheeks get red and heat up with anger. I moved my head away again and pushed his chest. That didn’t seem to make anything better and I realized too late. He grabbed both my wrist with one of his hands and pinned them above my head, using his other hand to slip something into my mouth. I blinked a few times, winching at the pain that quickly started to burst into my head at the taste of whatever he gave me. My throat began burning and he once again smirked, letting go of my wrist and sliding his hands up my shirt, peeling it off me and taking his own off too. Pretty soon we weren’t wearing anything and the covers were pulled over us as the night carried on.
I wiped off the sweat that was dripping down my head with the back of my hand and took a deep, painful breathe. Slowly I remembered about the party and sighed.
“d**n it.” I whispered and hit myself in the head. What was I thinking? It was going to be hell trying to clean up the house before my roomie got home. Hopefully he would understand. As I took a deep breathe again and shifted to get myself out of bed I felt an arm clinging to my waist loosely. I turned to see a face and screeched, rolling over and falling off the side of the bed. His body jerked up and a sly grin spread across his face. I didn’t remember that? But…no that’s a lie I did. I remember I didn’t want that…any of that.
“Hey princess.” He said and slowly got up, slipping into a pair of boxers. I shook my head, it pounding from the fall and the hang over and stood up, the covers wrapped tightly around my naked body.
“Don’t call me that.” I snapped and turned toward the bathroom. He reached out, stepping closer and grabbing my arm he turned me to face him. Leaning down he pressed his lips against mine and I slipped my hand between our faces and pushed him away.
“Don’t come near my either.” I hissed and moved my arm of his grasp. I didn’t even know his name or how he got into my party but he didn’t have the right to do what he did to me. No matter what.
“You’re such a sleeper Tony. Just wait until I tell all the guys how you threw yourself at me. Can’t wait to see what Ed’s face will look like.” The smirk once again took over his face and I looked dead straight at him. He went to our school. He knew about Ed and I. But…Nobody knew about Ed and I. Not even Cathie who I tell everything.
“Who are you?” I asked as I narrowed my light blue eyes at him. Slowly he moved closer and wrapped his arms tightly around my waist.
“You have that bad of a hang over that you don’t honestly know? It’s Cameron, Tony.” He said and chuckled as I tried to get away. Cameron. Ew. I actually loved him once. We went out for a year before I found out he was sleeping with another girl in our school and I dumped him. He never figured out why and hated me for it but I mean come on, anyone could figure out why I did that. I wasn’t going to stay in something like that.
Yeah I don't know what else to write now
I got the idea from combining a whole bunch of RP plots together
one night...
Any helpful comments on how to go on please? xD
